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Lithorph

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Wow dude :)

Another amazing song :).
I havn't seen you on msn for a while, i miss our stereomix clipspam xD

Well this was interesting.

Lets start with asking one question.
Do you know rellika? Or did you ask him if you could put lyrics on this?
I acually like your voice, it could be really good if properly mastered.
But this is just a clusterfuck at mid part.
Sounds to me like you took his mp3 and added your own without any sort of mixing or mastering.
Anyways, i still like the intro, gives a kind of greenday feel ^^
Listen to my shit, its not good but its something.
-Lith

youngcasper responds:

hey thanks verry much for the input im realy glad you took the time to narow it down for me, honestly we never asked, a friend of mine had the instrumental on his comp and i was like....i like like that lets make a song and thats how it happened lol, but after forever of not knowing who the producer of this track was the third guy under me introduced me to his page and now im really glad he did becouse the producer seems to like this and to me thats all that matters:) i will def check out your music homie....oh and yeah we got so cought up in finishing this we never took the time to mix or master anything these lyrics/vocals were recorded with a simple autotune other than that no other effects were used

OMG AMAZING

No its not. I hate people stealing a slot of newgrounds top 5 and 0 bombs everyone else's songs (The ones that are worth being up here)

Nice

Its really an energic song, i wonder what tempo you used , 160-170?
Haha you are like the opposite of me, i make melodies in 4 minutes and then the building of the song takes forever.

Check my stuff out if you have time :)
-Lithorph

Nice :P

Reminds me of Marilyn Manson, Dont know why though, might be the vocals xD
Well done, you did a great job on this

OMGOMGOMG

AMAZING!
I would add 100 stars if possible.

ioneofmany responds:

Haha you're awesome. :D

Hey

Not too bad as you dont fail with the notes.
The piano could be better tho, the sample not the notes.
I imagine you use fl studio, please "buy" some new percussions as these sounds like the first set of drums that presents to you.
The lead could be more interesting other then the arp'y thing you got going.
As it is a remix, you could mix it up.
Sorry to be so harsh, but i know how hard it is, as im not that good either.
I wont zerobomb you, but i wont 5 either.
-Lithorph

NubbyCakums responds:

Ummm thanks, I'm glad i don't "fail" with notes.

As for the piano, yeah, I just used FL Keys and tweaked the plain piano preset, but I don't know of any other piano plug-ins.

And yes, I know i need to make it a "remix" right now it basically just structure for an actual remix in the future.

Also, your not being harsh at all. Your just leaving an honest review.

Im dancing im dancing.

Nah im not. i can hear you put an effort with this, hence the 7 stars.
But in my opinion, its nothing special, mostly arps, strange sounds and so on.
The percussions sounds like generic fl studio basic drums.
Im sorry, its not good enough for me. But 7 for effort.

Im not that good myself but i hope you appreciate me being honest with you.

Ok dude, i have no compassion.

Im not going to zerobomb this since its not a bad song even tho its mainly arps.
The reason people are zerobombing you is.. and here it comes... YOU STOLE OTHER PEOPLES MUSIC. They will never forget, WE will never forget. And i also like how your english turned from jibberish to proper english all of a sudden?
The reason im sad atm, is because you have potential dude, but you wasted your chance here on newgrounds.
And im sitting here.. wondering.. is this song stolen?.. we will never know..

I enjoyed it. but

Idk im not really fond of waiting for 2.47 minutes before the kick enters. But thats just my opinion, and i wont zero bomb as it is pretty good. Though its too much pads for my taste xD

ambiguousMAN responds:

The kicks enter at 1:22 D: But yeah I guess I did wait too long to add them. Btw thanks for not zero-bombing it lol.

Thanks for listening!

Short guy that loves to make super phun handzup

Age 31, Male

Between 2 jobs....

um...

Sweden

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